Your hero reads like a glitch: 'portfoliois', funky glyphs, and a sentence that dies mid-thought.
Lines like "Think your portfoliois the best?ââ§", "More than a ranking.Real opportunities.", and the dangling fragment "This side project made" make the page feel unfinished. The core action (submit + bid) is mentioned, but the mechanics and outcome arenât explained clearly in the hero.
FIX ITRewrite the hero so itâs tidy and explicit. Example: Headline: "Prove your portfolio is the best." Subhead: "Submit your work, set a bid for visibility, and climb a public leaderboard seen by clients, recruiters, and collaborators." Remove stray glyphs and fix spacing.
"people looking for the best" is not an audience. It's a mystery.
Copy says "people looking for the best" and "the right people" but never says who those people are â hiring managers, clients, studios, agencies? Without that, 'get discovered' is just marketing fluff.
FIX ITName the audience explicitly in the hero and benefits. Example line: "For designers, freelancers, and product builders who want client leads and collaborations."
"Outbid everyone. Take the #1 spot." Great â why should I care? What happens next?
You promise visibility but don't explain what the top spot gives you: impressions, contact details, priority placement in searches? The benefits list (find clients, grow your brand) is generic and repeats itself.
FIX ITAdd 3 concrete outcome bullets under the hero: e.g. "Top spot = featured position on the leaderboard", "Seen by hiring managers & clients browsing for talent", "Earn inbound leads and collaboration requests" (then link each to a short explainer).
You've got a 'WHY BESTFOLIO?' header and no answers. Thatâs the ghost of credibility.
There are no testimonials, no example results, no clear rules or moderation explained on the page copy shown. The lone fragment "This side project made" looks like a cut-off case study â which makes the site feel amateurish and risky when money is involved.
FIX ITAdd three trust anchors: 1) a short real user quote (name + role), 2) a one-line stats row (e.g. "X creators discovered" â use real, verifiable numbers), 3) a visible rules/guarantee blurb: "Bids are transparent â see who tops the board; profiles are verified" (or link to Rules).
One button that says "Submitâ" is like yelling "send" with no subject line.
The single CTA "Submitâ" doesn't tell me what submitting costs, what happens after I submit, or how bidding works. There's no secondary CTA for curious visitors (e.g., 'How bidding works' or 'See sample winners').
FIX ITReplace button copy with a clearer primary + secondary CTA. Primary: "Submit & Bid for Top Spot". Secondary (link): "How bidding works" which opens a short explainer modal.